Feedback For Presentation

Useful Feedback:

• Relevant information nicely condensed to give a sense of timeline.
• Could have been more visual. 
• Physical examples or explanations could have been used.
• Use more imagery to convey points.
• Some slides were overly text heavy. 
• Consider visual presentation more. 
• Links with Graphic Design are strong which allows them to be used for a design brief. 
• Explain why geometry has been useful when showing examples. 
• Considered the application of the chosen subject. 

Useless Feedback: 

• Very interesting useful presentation. 
• Very intellectual points made. 
• Strong research into history. 
• Interesting link to Graphic Design. 
• Very interesting. 
• Really liked this. 
• Lots of information. 
• Quite meaty. 

3 Objectives for this project: 

1. Use more visual clues to expand my research. 
2. Understand how Graphic Design relates to Geometry more. 
3. Physical examples and sources would be useful - primary research (use more!).